Case on pornography.
Three clients accused in this case. One of the man’s sons was selling the tapes to his friends. Resulting in a ten year old boy masturbating. I don’t think the issues are given the kind of weight they deserve, some of the issues are weight and just brushed through.
Jabali’s father resurfaces and still wants his son.
Richard’s sons come to his office. His first born as usual is in trouble. Had been drinking and found himself in police custody. Family tension plays out again here.
At the same time Elsie is stressed and frustrated, the secretary offers her a drink. The two drink in the board room. Surely, you cannot tell me that they would be as foolish as not only to drink in the office but furthermore in the boardroom where the chances of being caught are so high.
Richard, confuses the smell of alcohol in the office with it being that his son was still drinking in his office. In anger he hits the boy
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This is abit better, but still, you have just highlighted content. It would be better if you relate to scripting principles you've learnt so far.
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