Thursday, April 8, 2010

NAIROBI LAW

Episode where business looses biggest client. Not enough conflict brought out to show the intensity of the situation. So far worst court scene yet, the conflict and drama seems to have no concrete base. The conflict and how it is presented is wanting. Language of scene used is too intensely casual. Use of the term 30 bob by the judge..
It is evident that they do not have enough props… The use of KENPACK water bottles in the court room by the lawyers to hold their water…. Surely, not serious. Makes the scene look too random and not properly set up.
Elsie and Paul her ex and Jabali’s (her son) father, fight over son. Meeting in her office, this scene is terrible. Sound effects are bad and background music meant to add drama sounds like something from an old action movie.

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